What’s one thing that separates a riveting blog from a so-so one?
Good writing.
You can know everything about your topic and link to the best bloggers on the Web, but people won’t want to read your blog if they don’t understand what you’re saying.
So how do you write well?
The first thing to remember is writing is hard work. As I started this piece, I sat at a blank computer screen for about 10 minutes, biting my nails and trying to figure out how to begin. That’s normal. Whatever your topic, your writing needs to convey your passion about it, or it’s going to fall flat.
And passion takes effort.

The Art of Writing Well
Here are some tips to help you write well, culled from nearly 20 years writing and editing for daily newspapers:
- Be conversational: Don’t fall into the trap of the high-and-mighty tone. It’s a blog, not a dissertation. To get started, imagine what you would tell your best friend about the subject you’re writing about, and then write that. It will probably be quite compelling.
- Use active voice: That’s likely a term you haven’t heard since grade school. It simply means: The subject of the sentence should do the action, rather than receive it.
Bill hit Tom is active voice. Tom was hit by Bill is passive voice. Active voice strengthens writing because it lets verbs provide the punch in the sentence.
- Use simple words: A blog isn’t a place to impress people with your million-dollar vocabulary unless you’re writing for an audience of linguists. Why use lackadaisical when lazy will do? Or taciturn when reserved or quiet works as well?
- Vary sentence structure, but keep most short: A sentence should have one main point. If you find yourself trying to say too much in one sentence, split it into two or even three sentences. Readers will find several short sentences easier to understand than one long one. But don’t start every sentence the same way. “I think …” “I think … ” time and again will get boring. Mix it up.
- Use powerful verbs: Verbs are the action in the sentence, so choose powerful ones, such as run, fight, coerce, dodge, carouse, when you can rather than weak verbs, such as be, am, is.
- Use adverbs and adjectives sparingly: Adverbs, such as lightly or heavily, change the meaning of verbs. Adjectives, such as red and beautiful, modify nouns. Adverbs and adjectives improve a sentence when they help paint a picture in the reader’s mind but should be avoided if they add little.
For example, brown is a useless adjective when used with dirt, as in brown dirt, because generally dirt is brown. But red volcanic dirt conjures an image.
- Keep it short: Yes, the Web is limitless, but readers’ attention spans aren’t. People scan blogs, and a big chunk of text can scare them off.
- Read it aloud: Even though people likely won’t read your blog aloud, one of the best ways to see if your writing sounds good is to read it to yourself. That way you can hear if it makes sense. You can notice if a sentence is so long that you can’t say it without taking a breath. And your ear will pick up on whether the tone is conversational.
- Write more than one draft: Blogs are meant to be off-the-cuff ideas, but that doesn’t mean you need to press publish the second you’re finished typing. As Ernest Hemingway, one of the world’s best writers said, “The first draft of anything is shit.” Here’s Hemingway’s tips for good writing, courtesy of CopyBlogger.
Blogging doesn’t need as many drafts as a novel might, but here’s what I suggest: Write a draft. Walk away from the computer and let it gel for at least a few minutes. Read it aloud. Revise. Read it again. Spell check. Preview it. (I tend to catch typos easier in Preview mode.) Publish.
- Just do it: The only way to get over writer’s block is to write and keep writing. As you write, you’ll get a sense of what works. As with anything else, the more you write, the better you get at it. And feel free to break any of these rules when it makes sense.
So get writing now.
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Wonderful piece of article, Gina. You’ve raised the bar here at TSB. It’s a great pleasure to have you as one of the associate writers.
Yan
Gina, welcome and awesome article. Yan, this is a terrific idea, well worded and phrased. Hats off to you, my friend.
Gina, those were some outstanding tips you just laid down and I am definitely taking note. I haven’t heard active voice since college when a friend of mind said I need, “write in an active voice more.” LOL! I still haven’t figured that one out, but oh well.
Love the verb discussion and the example of adjectives…awesome! It did conjure up a good visual for me.
Finally, thanks for sharing the Hemingway quote. Classic!
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Hey Fred
Thanks for dropping by. I’m sorry I’ve been busy of late to catch up with you. TSB is transforming – for better. My hands are pretty full this time of the year but I’m enjoying every bit of it.
Yan
Thanks for the warm welcome. I’m glad what I wrote resonated. As for the active voice, you used it throughout your comment — so I think you get it more than you realize.
– Gina
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And be certain to remember David Gerrold’s advice. The first million words are practice.
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“The first million words are practice.” I love that. Going to remember it use sometime.
Not sure if I’m up to a million words or what.
– Gina
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The first million words are practice..
I love this quote too. I’d better start counting now or maybe I should start all over again.
Welcome to the community, Tom and thanks for sharing.
I try to adopt a very personalised tone on my blog. I figure that is what blogs are for. I remember reading that the author of the Perry Mason books (not that I’ve read them) always said start with longer sentences and as the exciting part closes in, start to shorten the sentences. It makes for easy reading.
Great post by the way! I’m loving the new content on here even though it’s sad not to have Yan posting as much.
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Thanks for the part “it’s sad not to have Yan posting that as much”.
Yan didn’t post a lot before but Yan will ensure that all the contents here are of value and quality.
And Yan will still write for TSB.
Thanks, Tom.
Yan
PS: Yan is now busy promoting this blog.
Tom,
Very good point that I wish I had mad in my post about using the long sentences to build the tension. Your comment is a great addition to what I had to say. Thanks for adding it.
– Gina
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I’d only add that it’s easy to get caught up in tweaking your writing to make it perfect, and at some point you’ve just gotta let it go.
It all sounds so easy – ha!
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Emma,
Another great point I wish I had made in my post. It’s good to tweak; it’s not good to obsess. Thanks for adding that idea to the post.
– Gina
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Great post indeed.
Really loved about the idea of simple words. I have read many blogs that I couldn’t understand. I mean, those blogs were blogging about dog training and coaching not about the engineering of nuclear weapons.
Cheers,
The Moneyac
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Some useful information here and plenty of inspiration for my new blog for writers.
Thank you!
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The art of writing well in my opinion not more different than public speaking, use words, vocabulary and sentence in plain and simple so people generally can understand the essence, don’t use buzzwords or sophisticated language just to boost your background education, what’s the use if the audience didn’t get the message infact despices and having feeling arrogant.
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Yeh, it is sometimes difficult to write for the web, especially if you are used to writing for other purposes. I, for example, have been used to writing comprehensive reports. So I find it hard to write in the ‘active’ voice. But yes, that does make an article more engaging. And writing drafts and reading aloud is key.
Great tips.
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Hi Gina,
This is a good post for people who are daunted by writing their own piece. I would advise them to take your advice and “Just Do It” and adjust along the way.
There’s no other way to be a good writer other than to do it, or to hire someone else to do it for you. :D
All the Best!
Regards,
Erwin Chua
http://winning2win.com
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Writing isn’t my cup of tea, but wanting to learn more. Thank you for the wonderful tips. I really appreciate that.
More power.
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All of them are very important tips, I really liked this article. With the passing of time, I leaned a couple of them by intuition but with this topic I have reinforced them.
Thanks!
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Writing well isn’t so simple – specially if you’re writing in another language. Personally, I usually double check my spelling via Google (it’s so powerful!) to avoid commiting any grammatical mistake.
You can’t really expect to become a better writer just by reading this post. As in everything in life, it requires patience, a lot of reading to improve your vocabulary, and time.
Nice post, Gina! Welcome to TSB!
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Ikki,
I can’t even imagine how tough it is to write in a language that isn’t your native tongue. (I have enough trouble writing in my native tongue.) My husband is from Taiwan, and it always amazes me how well he can write in English.
– Gina
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Brilliant article Gina; you sound like every english teacher I ever had…now to start actually listening :p
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You’re exactly right – writing well is definitely an art!!
Although I consider myself a good writer, I have a lot to learn – especially in terms of varying the sentence structure – that seems to be one of my biggest “faults” lol
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Great tip on using an active voice. Made me think a little and I write a lot in the passive voice. Your tips allow me to work on my writing skills on my blog. Thanks!
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Hi, Gina:
Welcome to TSB! I can’t tell you how many times i’ve come across the phrase “just write and over time you will improve”.
But this is absolutely true. I started blogging back in March 2007 and once in awhile i will come across a post i wrote from back then and chuckle, at how bad my writing was.
It has improved ten fold since then. Writing is a constant improvement process, there is no such thing as “ok, now i’m great”.
Writers get better with time like fine wine. Well most do. lol.
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Missy,
The interesting thing is the people who think “OK, now I’m great” usually aren’t. I’ve found the best writers are the ones constantly learning, who don’t think they know it all. As an editor, I’ve worked with some amazing writers, who would call me hours after they filed a story just to change one word to make the piece better.
– Gina
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I have also “preached” on various web mastering and bloggers forums that writing blog posts is not a “task” but a thing of enjoyment. What you portray to your readers can be judged by your writing style. Using passive voice to home in the topic (or your opinions) can produce favorable feedback for your blog. In return, you establish a bigger fan-base; consequently signaling your popularity rise.
Many a times, to show off their English language capabilities, Bloggers tend to use words which require a dictionary to be kept on the side when reading the posts. As you rightly pointed out, blog posting, in other words, is communicating to your friends. Do you use complex words when talking to your friends? I guess No! So why do the opposite when talking to your online friends….your blog visitors?
Great Post, Gina Chen :)
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The Moneyac and Forsaken,
You both raise a great point about using big words. I was reading a blog today that used loquacious and alacrity in on paragraph. I stopped reading at that point. Reading a blog shouldn’t be that much work, eh.
– Gina
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Everyone,
Thanks for this overwhelmingly wonderful welcome to Thou Shall Blog. I’m very thankful to Yan for giving me the chance to do a guest blog, and I hope I’ll be able to visit again.
Thanks for making my debut at TSB so memorable.
– Gina
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I used to have problems with writing (especially because English is not my primary language) but practice, practice, practice!
and of course reading tips like these help a lot too
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Me too. But I think its not an excuse not to achieve perfection in writing. :-)
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To be an effective writer, one also needs to have a lot of persistence and patience. If a writer lacks these two important qualities, they will fail to understand what their readers want to learn
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True — very true. Persistence pays off, as does listening to constructive criticism.
Nobody likes to be told something doesn’t work. But the best writers, I think, listen to all suggestions, even if they don’t follow them all.
– Gina
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Gina
Useful list of points to remember, thanks for sharing! As a young writer, reading aloud has and continues to help me with my writing- it could be a research paper, book review or blog post, do yourself and your readers a favor, read your writing out loud. :)
I agree with your point about using simple words, when it comes to blogging, stay within common use- don’t try to impress readers with fancy words.
Lastly, before publishing, step away from the piece and return to with later with fresh eyes.
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I can’t emphasize how important it is to “step away” from a piece and then read it again. Whenever I do that, I can always find ways to improve it.
– Gina
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Nice article Gina and one that I should make use of when writing a post for my blog. My greatest hurdle is that ever since school I have always looked for shortcuts to complete any assignment whether it be English or Science. It never really worked out with maths as shortcuts tend to give you the wrong answer.
In a sense I am the perpetual lazy blogger and I feel that my posts could definitely do with a lot of polishing to get it up to your standards. Unfortunately, for me that would take the fun out of blogging. Having said all that you may be pleased to know that I am conversational and most of my posts as short, once again because of the perpetual lazy blogger aspect. ;)
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Sire,
You raise a good point — if polishing your post too much takes all the fun out of blogging, why do it. I don’t think blog posts need to be perfect. They need to express a point of view. I’m much less troubled by a typo here or there than I am by a blog that says nothing. I think you make a good point that you don’t want to overdue the polishing.
– Gina
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Hmmm… This article makes sense to me because I was never a great writer and usually I just write spontaneously. I could definitely use this advice. Thanks.
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Melvin,
But don’t use the spontaneity. That’s good. Work with it. Blog writing should be spontaneous.
– Gina
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Nice article Gina. You have obviously learned from a real pro. Yan I’m guessing? I especially agree that we’re not here to impress people with complicated writing. Yan made an excellent choice having you help with Blogging Tips for Beginners. :)
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Brain D. Hawkins,
Thanks. I’m very pleased that Yan gave me this opportunity.
– Gina
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Thanks, Brian. She is just awesome and I’m glad she accepted my invitation. I like her style of writing and I’m sure the readers here will pick up a thing or two from her. So far the response has been pretty good.
@Gina: We look forward to more of your contributions and we hope you enjoyed talking to the readers here as much as we did talking to you.
Well written. It’s important to write with passion – put your soul in your phrases, and it will catch people audience.
This with talent – a good writer is born.
Thanks Gina, writing daily to your blog as long as you are the authority of the niche wouldn’t be too hard.Yet writing stuff that we are not accustom will take time to do proper digging of story background, hypothesis, assumptions, and realization of research result, this is what I called integrity in writing not just skin surface and flooded with hot keywords to manipulate search engine.
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Ari,
Very true. Good writing won’t solve the problem of content that is lacking in context or facts. You need both — the gathering and the putting it all together. Thanks for making that point.
– Gina
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Just do it, would be the best tip of all in that list. I often see first-timers like to go around looking for these lists and read books on how to write well… but never started writing themselves and hope they’ll start as an expert!
It’s like hoping to be a basketball star through reading about it!
The only way anyone could really absorb these tips, or any another you might have picked up anywhere else, and grow to good at it is to practice writing.
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You said it. Blog hard and blog often. Love it.
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That’s great! Keep blogging man!!!!!
Check out http://www.knrdesigns.com first though!
Hi Gina,
I have to agree with you that writing is hard work. It requires effort to shape it to the way you like it to be. Perhaps the quote from Samuel Johnson could sum it up when he said “What is written without effort is in general read without pleasure”. I really enjoyed reading your post.
Peter Lee
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Peter,
That’s a great Samuel Johnson quote. I hadn’t heard that before, but it really sums up the writing experience. Thanks for adding to the conversation.
– Gina
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Nice solid article. I can definitely relate to the sitting in front of the computer not knowing what to write. :)
It is fun looking over peoples blogs and websites and seeing how their writing becomes better over time- most people learn a better flow, how to relate better, and how to make the most out of their words.
You are a great addition to Thou Shall Blog.
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Jen,
Thanks for the welcome. You raise an important point — reading other people’s blogs can help you learn from them and write better. I appreciate your sharing.
– Gina
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Yes, wonderful piece by Gina. I also discovered a very simple technique for getting good content done, even if one doesn’t feel like writing. Can’t wait to hear about it? Here goes – If you don’t feel like writing, just get a good friend of yours and start “TALKING” to him about the tips/hints/whatever that you want to write about. Ensure that you have a tape recorder handy to record everything you will say. Tell your friend to feel free to ask you questions as you talk along. At the end of the day you will be surprised that you have put together some interesting content. A software like Dragon Naturally Speaking can come handy here.
The point with “TALKING” is that lots of people don’t have any problems talking. We usually spend several hours arguing our points with a colleague or friend but find it difficult to write. I guess it’s that age long fear we have had right from school about how difficult it is to write. Writing is really no difference than “TALKING”.
I hope this helps someone. Thanks, once again, Gina, for sharing this wonderful article.
Spin Ready,
Good suggestion about “talking” first before writing. In my years as an editor, often my reporters come to me stumped: “I don’t know how to start my story.”
My advice was similar to yours. “Tell me what the story is about, and the first thing you say, that’s probably where you should begin.”
Thanks for sharing.
– Gina
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Good to know you found my suggestion helpful, Gina. :)
You have a point there. I will definitely keep this in mind when I write the next posts.
Daniel
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Daniel,
Glad you found the post and comments helpful.
– Gina
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These are great tips. I only recently found your blog and I am glad I have. These tips extend beyond the blog world and into every day life.
It’s so important to look professional in your writing and sloppy typos can really hurt your credibility. At the same time, it’s good to write in a way that people will enjoy, and find interesting to read. It’s important to remember that you want to write stuff that somebody will like to look at.
H-Town,
Glad the post was helpful.
– Gina
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Great Post here — I think that this is solid info for those who do want to keep a blog on their business website, but aren’t necessarily writers. It’s like the basics I remember from college English essay writing classes. Strong verbs, active voice, do a draft — thanks for reminding me!
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Portland Roofer,
You are most welcome. Glad you found the post helpful.
– Gina
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All you have stated are the important elements of writing well. It’s not easy to master though, but practice makes perfect. :-)